Strong writing skills are essential for a high IELTS band score. Our exam-style simulations and expert feedback help you refine your writing, from introductions to conclusions.

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Here are three common student struggles in IELTS Writing, with our expert feedback to help improve each section:

1. Student A: Struggles with the Introduction

Performance: Has difficulty crafting a clear and engaging introduction.

Feedback: Start with a paraphrased version of the question, followed by a clear thesis statement outlining your main points.

Example Case:

Task: "Some people believe that technology is making life better. Discuss both views and give your opinion."

Student’s Introduction: "Technology is everywhere. People have different opinions about it."

Revised Introduction: "With rapid technological advancements, some argue that life is improving, while others fear negative consequences. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my viewpoint."

Feedback Case: Ensure your introduction clearly outlines the main ideas and provides a roadmap for the essay.

2. Student B: Struggles with the Body Section

Performance: Has trouble organizing ideas logically and supporting arguments effectively.

Feedback: Use topic sentences, provide examples, and maintain logical progression between ideas.

Example Case:

Task: "Some people think that studying abroad is beneficial. Discuss both sides."

Student’s Body Paragraph: "Studying abroad is good. You meet new people. It can be expensive, though."

Revised Body Paragraph: "One advantage of studying abroad is exposure to diverse cultures, which enhances personal growth. For example, international students often develop cross-cultural communication skills. However, high tuition fees and living costs can be a drawback, making it inaccessible to some students."

Feedback Case: Develop each point fully with explanations and examples to strengthen your argument.

3. Student C: Struggles with the Conclusion

Performance: Writes weak conclusions that do not summarize key points effectively.

Feedback: Restate the main argument and offer a final thought, avoiding new information.

Example Case:

Student’s Conclusion: "That's why studying abroad is good and bad. People should think about it."

Revised Conclusion: "In conclusion, studying abroad provides valuable cultural experiences and academic opportunities, though financial challenges must be considered. Ultimately, individuals should weigh the benefits and drawbacks based on their personal circumstances."

Feedback Case: A strong conclusion reinforces your argument and leaves a lasting impression.

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